Monday, 5 November 2018

Narrative Text, A Short Story : A Giant Bread Castle

A Giant Bread Castle
by Miss Siska



Once upon a time there lived 6 brothers, Floury, Eggsy, Yeastie, Sweety-Salty the twins and Butter in a small cabin bowl in a Wonderpastry Land. They lived under Bakery Factory. Where all people have to work together to build a Bread Castle. Hmmm... it’s a Giant Bread Castle.



Floury, the eldest brother is selfish. Eggsy, the second brother is furious. Everytime he gets mad, he always cracks himself. Yeasty and Butter are both patient and diligent boys. Unlike the twins, they’re sometimes lazy. Urgh! Only Butter is a patient boy.


One day, they had a bitter quarrel over the Bread Castle they were building. It’s still half-built castle anyway. But five brothers began to be arrogant about themselves. Especially Floury, he thought the castle wouldn’t be completely built without him. 


“Look at me! Without me, everthing is nothing!” 

“Sure not. The castle will be just a crumb without me!”, Eggsy objected.
“But the castle won’t be that big without me!”, Yeastie added angrily.
“We’re tired. We don’t want to work anymore.”

As everybody turned selfish, there came a hundred Ant Troops began to break the castle. 


“Nooooooooooooo!”, the six brothers shouted surprisingly.


The half-built castle now just ruined. So the brothers had to rebuild back to the square one. As five brothers felt regret of their arrogance, Butter came home. 


“Well, The Bread Castle would be there if together we stand,” Butter advised wisely.


“OK! Now we have to rebuild the castle again. Let’s go!”, Floury, Eggsy, Yeastie and the twins added.


“Together we stand!”, Butter encouraged others passionately.



THE END


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